Friday, June 5, 2020

10A- Elevator Pitch No. 1


5 comments:

  1. K-9 Condiments!? I love the idea. This is such a wide business opportunity you have thought of. I think you could even implement this for animals who are overweight, adding supplements to their diet that may help with the digestive process, just a thought. As far as the business itself, you have a wide range of options to help consumers with their pets; protein and vitamins, whey, supplements for specific malnutrition event and so on. Great job, I think you have a solid opportunity to create a business I have not yet heard about.

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  2. Hi Lily,

    I think you did a great job on the pitch. I think I have commented on your post about this opportunity before and you provided some great information in the pitch- and asked for your second meeting (I failed to do that - so great job). The only improvement I would suggest is to choose a different location for your background and try to put the lightsource behind the camera source. You seemed engaged with your topic and audience and that made me want to listen to what you had to say.

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  3. Hi Lily,

    well done on the pitch. It was thoughtful, to the point and asked for the business. Thinking about K9 condiments, I wonder if it would help with dogs who have been exposed to human food as well. That happened to our dog because of a roommate years ago and he never is interested in anything we give him. it may be an opportunity to give him something he likes and be nutritious.

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  4. Hi Lily,

    You sold me. I enjoyed hearing about your product in further depth. I was intrigued by the fun flavors you introduced and how the product gets easily applied onto the dog food. For your pitch, the highlight for me was at the end when you called out your “ask”. It was direct and laid out the next step for the viewer which was smart of you. One suggestion would be to speak just a little louder on your next pitch. It was great though!

    Bridget

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  5. Hi Lily,
    I like your idea of how to add more nutrition to help dogs. I thought your pitch was great and did a good job of describing how your product solves the problem of underweight dogs. And I thought the name for the product itself was descriptive and creative. I was wondering if this solution could be applied to different animals like cats.

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